Her wrinkled face shows that she is old But her weak eyes tell something that is never told
She remembers her childhood, her dolls, her friends, and her first book
Her dark blue school uniform and her mother’s lessons on how to cook
She did not understand why her parents made her quit school
Everyday her brothers attended their classes, and she watched as a fool
Days passed, months passed, and so did years
One day she went to her husband’s home while her mother shed tears
First she became a daughter, then a wife, and later a mother
She carried her life for her family, without much bother
She even sacrified her own desires and dreams
But is there anyone to listen what her heart screams?
She was overwhelmed when she gave birth to a baby boy
She taught him his first words, and bought him a toy
Today when she stands in a window looking somewhere
Air slowly combs strands of her gray hair
Unnoticeable tiny tear rolls down her chick
Now there are only memories to pick
Far away she sees a pipe throwing out unwanted white detergent foam
Just below her window hangs a building board that reads – women’s old age home
6 comments:
a beautiful rendition of thoughts..
rilly.. you have deftly carved a beautiful virtual picture of this lady into our minds.
good show!
Nice and touching poem...I hope that it reaches the heart of millions. These kind of thoughts are really need to be followed by today's young generation and should learn to protect their old parents just as their parents protected them when they were kids.
One more message that we get from this poem is that society should treat male and female child equally. There are lots of social problems caused due to gender inequality.
Just read this poem of yours that Susanta had shared with me. I really loved it... Loved the way you have created magic with words, loved the way you have kept the minute rhyming words and other details in mind while writing it. Just A beautiful poem,superb,... carry on!! Looking forward for some stuffs.... Well do visit my blog inspiredbyeminem.blogspot.com
Thanks Dipan..... :)
I am moved to read your comment... thanks a lot for appreciating my words... Now I'm following your blog... and looking forward to read and write more and more... :)
Nice poem - Naresh
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